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Erosion Part V (Veronica/Logan) PG [WIP]

Title: Erosion
Author: rejeneration, but you can call me Jen.
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, Tom, Trina, Xavier, smidge o’ the Wallace Fennel
Word Count: Part V: 3880
Rating: NC-17 overall, this part PG
Summary: Love, actually.
Spoilers/Warnings: Season 2; This is FF.
A/N: A million years ago I started writing a story. Since then I have gone on to dabble over with the kids of SPN, have had a darn good time doing it, but this thing keeps nagging me. Since I’ve been getting a myriad of emails asking for more, and because you’re killing my conscience, here it is: Erosion, Part Five. This was the story I started for loveathons Epic Challenge. I know it's far, far too late to be judged, and that this community is mostly inactive now, but since it was written here, I hoped I could finish housing it here.
A/N 2: I have author noted rindee so many times, in so many places, in so many ways. She’s the wizard behind the curtain, ya’ll. I couldn’t do what I do without her. Love ya, baby.

If you’re still interested in having me finish this, you’re gonna have to holla. If not, I’m letting it go and going back to writing Sam and Dean. -grin- I do miss you guys, though.

Parts I & II || Part III || Part IV


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Tags: all fiction posts, challenge - epic smut summer 2006, member - rejeneration
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Anonymous

August 26 2007, 13:49:03 UTC 10 years ago

I'd already given up on this story but then I somehow found this latest update. SQUEEEEE!!!!!! I went back and read everything again...ah, the memories. This is a wonderful, epic tale that you're spinning and your writing is beautiful. I love your depiction of a grown-up responsible Logan and the bond you've created between him and Trina. I don't quite understand your Veronica, but can't wait to see her journey through. Please, please continue. It is so hard to let the VM universe go and through the many talented writers in fandom, I'm finding it eases the pain a bit. Thank you for this story.
This is a wonderful, epic tale that you're spinning and your writing is beautiful.

Thank you, and truly, thank you.

I love your depiction of a grown-up responsible Logan and the bond you've created between him and Trina.

I blame Trina, of all people for this. -smiling- She really wanted the opportunity to be a big sister to Logan. With her own family, with her son, she wanted a way to make up for some of the ways she hadn't been there for him. I wasn't in a position to deny.

I don't quite understand your Veronica, but can't wait to see her journey through.

Veronica and I have a purely, love-hate-loathe relationship at this moment. -grin- I'm trying to bring Veronica, a character I've seen almost massacred (though Logan's characterization suffered a worst fate, IMO), depth we never got to see on the show. I hope eventually I'll be able to pull it off.

Thank you for reading! I mentioned to the last anon that there are so many annon readers. Should you comment again, give me a name to distinguish you by, even if its not your own. -grin- I'd love to know who you all are!
Thanks for updating, this is one of my very favorite VM fics, and I hope you'll be able to finish it! Really luscious writing, very evocative and insightful.
So happy to hear it's a favorite! I didn't think anyone would even _remember_ it. -grin- Thank you again for reading!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I'm all choked up by that ending. lovely, lovely job. I'll be heartbroken if you don't finish this fic. It's SO incredibly well-written and engaging and sweet and romantic and wonderful... :flails: Please write more! I just read it all in one sitting, and I love it all, but especially this last chapter. Great job!
One setting! You brave, brave creature you. -grin-

I'll try to finish this. It's a labor of love. I just had to be sure there was even still interest, 'cause if there wasn't, man... back to SPN I go! -grin-
Okay, I will admit that I had kind of forgotten about this story until I saw the posting, but I cannot allow you to think that leaving it unfinished is at all acceptable. I like this non-perfect world that you have established here and I really want to see how it ends. Veronica being this separated from Keith is a bit odd for me, and I was surprised at the ruthless nature of Tom (although maybe I shouldn't have been -- no one should just roll over in the situation he is in). I really enjoy Logan's maturity and growth and his relationship with Trina and Xavier is sweet. It does seem as if Logan cannot help but try to ride to the rescue, still, however.

Again, I would really like to see how you end this. Please don't abandon the story and the readers! Do I need to put a tickler in my life somewhere to come back and harass you about it later? Cuz I will. Not a problem. Just let me know!
Doh, sorry about that! Pasted two replies together! -sigh-

Okay, I will admit that I had kind of forgotten about this story until I saw the posting, but I cannot allow you to think that leaving it unfinished is at all acceptable.

There's a part of me that goes, "Damn!" This story is such an undertaking and there's still. so. far. to. go!

Veronica being this separated from Keith is a bit odd for me

I wonder how you'll feel about the actual Keith element in this when it's developed. I hope for it to be a little more enlightening, but for the die-hard Keith fans, man... I think I'm gonna lose ya'll. -grin-

I was surprised at the ruthless nature of Tom (although maybe I shouldn't have been -- no one should just roll over in the situation he is in).

Precisely! Can you imagine how someone would react to that? Devastated, enraged? Tom is a world of both. And he's smart, too. He doesn't have Logan's... moxy... but he's got brains and resources and he's not going down without a fight.

I really enjoy Logan's maturity and growth and his relationship with Trina and Xavier is sweet. It does seem as if Logan cannot help but try to ride to the rescue, still, however.

I think _I_ will always see Logan as a rescuer, you know? To me, Logan's a selfish jerk, capable of being hurtful and nasty and just... lashing out and whipping anyone within arms length, BUT... Logan is also the kind of person who loves people with such a passion, such a fight... and Logan has loved Veronica for a long time. He's not the kind of person who stops, no matter how much he's shit on. He doesn't want to play games, he doesn't want to get raked over anymore coals... and he's freaked as fuck about giving her another chance. But he's still gonna do it, and he's still gonna be the White Knight.

a_h_c

10 years ago


I was so thrilled to see another chapter to this story. You do a fabulous job writing grown-up Logan and Veronica. I love how you've crafted this story of their reunion and the challenges they face in making it work after so many years and so much heartache.

But my favorite so far is the relationship you've created between Trina and Logan. It's so nice to see Logan having a real family that's loving and supportive.

I'm looking forward to where you take this. I wasn't sure how Tom would materialize but he certainly made an entrance. And like others, I don't know how I feel about him since his reaction seems perfectly natural to me. I wouldn't be too pleased either if my fiancée dropped a bomb like that on me. I'm interested to see if what additional characterization there will be for Tom and how this particular thread will be played out.

Please, please, please do continue this. It's a terrific story and I would love to see it to completion.
But my favorite so far is the relationship you've created between Trina and Logan. It's so nice to see Logan having a real family that's loving and supportive.

Trina, very much so from the beginning, wanted a chance to be a big sister for her little brother. She wanted the opportunity to have a family and to give him that much. She wanted Logan involved in the life of her son. -smiling- I'm so happy I got to do that in this fandom.

but he certainly made an entrance.

-laughing- Didn't he though? I actually kinda like Tom.

And like others, I don't know how I feel about him since his reaction seems perfectly natural to me. I wouldn't be too pleased either if my fiancée dropped a bomb like that on me.

Tell me about it! This isn't the last we've seen of Tom, but Logan is going to have a very serious heart-to-heart with Veronica about him, 'cause even though Logan's not interested in being all BFF with Tom, he _does_ understand where he's coming from. Doesn't mean he's ready to lie down, but... he's not ready to fuck him over either.

I will absolutely try to continue. Thanks so much for reading, hon!
Oh please please please please finish! You write so beautifully, and I LOVE the storyline - I want to see what happens with Veronica and the baby. I'm so glad you updated! I went back and re-read the story from the beginning and I'm smitten all over again. Thank you!
You write so beautifully, and I LOVE the storyline

Thank you so much! Re-reading, poor you! -grin- I'll get some more up soonishly. -grin-
I'm so glad that you finally decided to post another chapter! I absolutely love this fic. Hopefully it's not too long before the next part is up.

Mmm, I can't make any promises. I'd kind of like to get a big chunk written before the next update. If I only had the time to just write it all. But thank you for reading, hon.
whatever attracted Vee to this Tom fellow anyways? what a smarmy bastard.

more more more!
But put yourself in Tom's shoes. -smiling- Poor Tom. I mean... one minute his fiancé is in a dressing room trying on gowns and the next? She's disappeared. He doesn't know where she's gone. Presumably she calls him at some point, is all "Tom, we need to talk." So he finds -her- only to discover she's planning on absconding with his _child_. Nooooot so cool. -grin- I can understand Tom's anger. And seriously? Tom's anger is so much more mature than say, Logan's? Or the Logan we know from the past. The Logan responsible for all the things he pulls together into a file. Tom's not there taking wild swings (other than with his mouth). He's just pissed. -grin- Presumably there was something more to Tom before all this.
When I saw this was updated I was jumping up and down! Thanks so much. I love this story. Please don't make me wait so long for a new update! next part please!!!!
Heh, sorry anon. It won't be _as_ long, 'cause that was almost like eight months, but it won't be too shortly, either. I'd like to get a good portion of the story finished before the next post. But thanks for reading!
I am really enjoying this, I hope you finish.
Mmmmmmmm... Dean.... handguns.

-blinks- What was I talking about again?

Oh yeah! Umm, finishing is definitely a goal. -grin-
OMG! You updated this! To be honest I had given up on it, but you proved me wrong. What a happy feeling ;) Amazing chapter, I love everything about it, especially the little details.

He reeks of 09’er entitlement. One of Veronica’s maybe not-so-secret little fetishes.
Ha, so true! Love this line.

Please continue, SPN can wait right? :)
OMG! You updated this!

I know!! Shocking, isn't it?

-sniffle- SPN _cannot_ wait. It really doesn't help that I have eight stories started and another twelve for another portion of it. -grin- Mmm, I love SPN fandom. -happy sigh- BUT... I will continue this. MUST now.

Thanks for reading hon!

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I just hate having a WIP, period! I promised myself I'd never write a WIP, 'cause there just too hard to finish. I hate it when I lie to myself. :(

The goal is to finish! Here's hoping I do. -smile- Thanks for reading!
I'm not too proud to beg if it means we get more chapters!
It's been wonderful reading back through all the previous chapters and now this one, so please, please, rest assured that there is plenty of interest for any further chapters...
-sings a lil' TLC-

Thanks so much, hon! I'm going to try and finish up a few more chapters and post 'em for ya'll. Thanks for reading.
I'm so glad you finally remembered this, I had given up on it even though there was still a little part of me that was still holding out for an update.
-grinning- Thanks so much for reading and letting me know, hon.

hollerin'

Anonymous

August 27 2007, 07:57:43 UTC 10 years ago

Okay, so here's my holla'. Almost squealed when I saw you posted again- I don't squeal. It'd been so long I actually had to read it all over again just to get all caught up & refresh the memory. It's 3:57 AM here & I'm finally done. But I came home late & decided to just start over again- it was worth it. I love how their so character true but at the same time you tentively bring out sides of them we wouldn't expect. And its not rushed either. Amazing job. UPDATE SOON.
So many anon readers!! Who are all you fabulous fabulous people? Do me a favor, will you and give me a name (even if it's not your own), so I know how to distinguish ya'll? -grin-

I will update soonish! Or at least I will try! I'll be huddled away writing this weekend. -smiling- Thanks so much for re-reading. I feel a little guilty for keeping you up into the wee hours!
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